Composing Essay

Today we composed the second part of our essay. We composed the second paragraph. Composing the paragraph wasn’t hard. I just used the checklist that my teacher taught me. After we got done we turned it in. After grading other students papers from other schools we graded our peers. Grading the papers of my classmates really brings onsite to their thoughts and process of writing. Someone graded my paper as a four out of nine. I felt that I couldn’t did better with my commentary and diction. All in all today was a productive day in class.

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